2002-08-07 | L.L. HAIKU J

okay, i'm an idiot. i did this haiku entry a while back, but i did it wrong. I was reading something that said they were 5-7-3 instead of 5-7-5. The thing that made me question myself was this radio commercial for coke or something where people do haikus, and they do it 5-7-5. I'm confused. So now I guess I will do a few 5-7-5 ones.

"Show Biz Kids"

If I meet the "Biz"

I will be more then a friend

He got what I need

"11th Inning Stench"

This Bud is a fool

There's no TYING in baseball

Go contract yourself

"Breathless"

We kissed for so long

You swallowed my oxygen

Supplied me with life

"Thornton"

Ultramagnetic

An eight-sided illusion

Full of pure cadence

"Pizza"

Last bite makes me sick

We'll never eat you again

Okay, one more peice

"Iron Mike"

Met him in Venice

He seemed a little hungry

I lent him my ear

"D.L. Buddies"

Stuck on an island

With nothing but good music

Ry, Jamie and Meg

"LDR"

Long distance woe-mance

Tests on every corner

Flying colors passed

"Jim Walewander"

No one remembers

Detroit was your stomping ground

How soon they forget

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